The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table provides data regarding the total number of people who came to Ashdown Museum. It
also
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provided the pie charts which illustrate the survey's outcome of visitor satisfaction, during the two periods of refurbishment.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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there were additional guests before and after the renovation of the museum. People who came
also
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had a different valuation when they were asked.
To begin
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with, the amount of people who came to the museum had significantly growth from 74,000 to 92,000. The information showed that very satisfied visitors had considerably increased from 15 to 35, followed by a satisfied experience grew from 30 to 40.
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, there was a marked decrease in the percentages of visitors reporting dissatisfaction, with the 'dissatisfied' category declining from 40 to 15, and 'very dissatisfied' decreasing from 10 to 5, suggesting an
overall
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positive trend.
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, five individuals did not respond during the same timeframe.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, overall".
Vocabulary: The word "provides" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • refurbishment
  • visitor numbers
  • satisfaction levels
  • very satisfied
  • satisfied
  • neither satisfied nor dissatisfied
  • dissatisfied
  • very dissatisfied
  • survey results
  • comparison
  • impact
  • effectiveness
  • visitor experience
  • overall improvement
  • increase/decrease in visitors
  • positive feedback
  • negative feedback
  • visitor survey
  • survey period
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