The charts show the sale of five different kinds of jam from 2009 to 2014.

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Graph basically presents and compares the aforementioned jam types in the form of lines, representing, how they are purchased between the relevant time period spanning from 2009 to 2014.

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Illustration, we can see one main but prominent feature,

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, 4 out of 5 products consistently show an upward trend in sales.

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, plum consumption has significantly decreased in the form of sales in comparison to the former product types. Coming to the Raspberry and strawberry side of data representation there is a persistent uptick in growth until 2012 which smoothes out later on in 2014, for grapes the growth is generally in an increasing pattern but there are noticeable irregularities.

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, considering the plum jams we see a downward pattern but a consistent one narrowing out smoothly until the end of a given period,

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, in conclusion, means that customers or consumers demand or favour certain types of jams more than others and the information potentially captures that.

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