Mrs Barreet, an English-Speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help in her home for a few hours a day next summer Write a letter to Mrs Barreet. In your letter 1. Suggest how you could help her in her home 2. Say why you would like to do this work 3. Explain when you will and will not be available

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Dear Mrs Barrett, I am writing

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letter in reference to an advertisement I saw in the daily newspaper yesterday, and would like to be considered for the position

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in consideration, as I am interested, in assisting you during the next summer for a few hours a day. Beginning with

work

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experience as a caretaker, I have been helping individuals with their routine

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as grocery shopping, cleaning the home and laundry

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, I could do the same for you.

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, I have attained a cookery class, and am capable of preparing delicious cuisines as well, which could be done during any events that are hosted at your place.

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is my profession, I have always wanted to engage myself in any

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that would bring a smile or happiness to a person's face.

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brings a lot of self-satisfaction at

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is a perfect opportunity for me to gain experience in order to admit myself as an Associate in the IPCT institute.

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, as a student who is currently pursuing a professional qualification, I will not be available for 3 days a week, to be specific on Friday, Saturday and Sunday, but if there are any urgent requirements, with prior communication, I would be able to make alterations in my leave arrangements. I look forward to hearing from you, and if you need any

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information, please do not hesitate to contact me. Yours Sincerely Isuru Bandara

isuru.cimaSun Nov 19 2023

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coherence cohesion

Ensure each paragraph conveys a clear main idea and avoid introducing new topics without proper elaboration.

coherence cohesion

Use a range of cohesive devices to better link ideas and maintain flow throughout the letter.

task achievement

Fully expand on all points outlined in the prompt to ensure comprehensive coverage of the task.

task achievement

The letter's tone is mostly suitable; however, maintain consistency in formality throughout.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

6.5

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

246 words

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