Two weeks ago you bought a radio from a local branch of a well-known chain of shops. It did not work properly. The shop took it back and said they would repair it. You have waited a week and it is still not ready. Write a letter to the shop. In your letter say what has happened and how you feel ask them to explain why there has been a delay ask them to repair the radio very quickly or to supply you with a new radio
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in regard to my recently bought Sony
radio
from one of your stores near Cleveland two weeks ago.
Let me explain my situation. First of all, I have chosen your shop according to
the best reviews on internet
. Unfortunately, my purchased item did not work properly. Add an article
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Additionally
, I brought the radio
back for the repairment. Since then
, I have been waiting for a week and extremely disappointed about it.
Furthermore
, I would like to be informed about the reason for delay
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the delay
Therefore
, I was told, that the radio
had a tiny damage and it would be repaired very quickly within a week.
I would be grateful if the item is repaired and brought back to me immediately. If it is not, I would like to be supplied with a new radio
of a
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model.
Thank you for your consideration! I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours Faithfully,
Soso KhurtsidzeCorrect article usage
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