It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your ownknowledge or experience.
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What works well
3Your essay presents thoughtful arguments on the importance of taking risks, showing a good understanding of the topic.
You effectively use examples to support your points, making your argument more persuasive.
The organization of your essay, with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion, contributes significantly to its readability and coherence.
Improvement Suggestions
4Continue to structure your essays with clear introductions, body paragraphs, and conclusions to maintain a high level of coherence and cohesion.
Enhance clarity by varying sentence structure and using transitional phrases between ideas and paragraphs.
Ensure that examples are clearly linked to your main points and develop each of them further for a stronger argument.
Review and refine your use of complex grammar and vocabulary to avoid minor inaccuracies that can distract from your overall message.
Word Count
IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.
A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.
Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.