Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Supporting Examples
Develop your examples more fully to support your arguments. Instead of using placeholders like ';lkadjl;kfja,dnfa;lkfd.' and 'adf;lkja;ldkf.', include concrete examples to illustrate your points.
Introduction & Conclusion
Ensure to include a clear introduction and conclusion in your essay. These components frame your discussion and provide a summary of your argument, adding to the coherence of your essay.
Essay Structure
Work on the structure of your essay. Organize your ideas into clear paragraphs, each with a main idea supported by examples or further explanation.
Task Response
Consider both sides of the argument fully by discussing the opposing viewpoint more extensively, and then clearly state your own position on the issue.
Task Engagement
You provided a clear overview of both views on personal questions in job interviews.
Attempt at Support
You attempted to use examples to support your points.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • job application
  • personal information
  • hobbies and interests
  • marital status
  • relevant
  • useful
  • privacy
  • assessing candidates
  • qualifications
  • experience
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