IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 6.5

The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
#show #world #pineapple #exports #three #countries #breakdown #cost #consumer #summarise #information #features #comparisons #minutes
The bar
chart
indicate
Change the verb form
indicates
show examples
 the
exports
 of
pinable
Correct your spelling
pinnable
 all over the world in the most producing countries (
country
 A,
country
 B and
country
 c) for two years in 2009 and 2019. The other pie
chart
 illustrates the percentage of
decreasing
Replace the word
decrease
show examples
 in the cost to each
pineaple
Correct your spelling
pineapple
 user in 2019.
Overall
,
country
 A shows the highest number of
pinapple
Correct your spelling
pineapple
exports
 in 2019
while
country
 c is considered the lowest
country
duing
Correct your spelling
during
 the same year . A
galnce
Correct your spelling
glance
 look at the bar
chart
 regarding the
pinapple
Correct your spelling
pineapple
exports
 in 2009 and 2019.
It is clear that
Country
 A achieved the apeak in
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
exports
 in 2019 above 10
millions
Change to singular
million
show examples
 metric
tonnnes
Correct your spelling
tonnes
.
On the other hand
,
country
 c recorded the least amount
osf
Correct your spelling
of
exports
 in the same year which is lower than 1 million metric
tonnnes
Correct your spelling
tonnes
.
In contrast
 with the
exports
 in 2009 ,
country
 B
is
Unnecessary verb
apply
show examples
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
achieved the
greast
Correct your spelling
greatest
great
 amount of
exports
 above 4 million metric
tonnnes
Correct your spelling
tonnes
. Regarding the other pie
chart
, the amount of distribution and retail are
therepresented
Correct your spelling
the represented
represented
there presented
 above
third
Change the article
a third
show examples
 of the
breakdon
Correct your spelling
breakdown
 of the
costbto
Correct your spelling
cost to
 the user which is 35%
while
 taxes is the lowest percentage 4% only .
Submitted by monahhj123 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, exports, country with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 4 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
▼

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
Topic Vocabulary:
  • charts
  • world pineapple exports
  • top three producing countries
  • 2009
  • 2019
  • breakdown
  • cost to the consumer
  • main features
  • comparison
  • relevant
What to do next:
Look at other essays: