The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012.

The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012.
The pie charts illustrate the proportion of five different kinds of books
which
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sold by a bookstore from 1972 to 2012.
It is clear that
both Adult
fictions
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and Children
ones
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had an upward trend
although
, Biography and the other part showed a downward trend. Regarding
to
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statistics, what stands out from the scheme is that Adult
fictions
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fame increased moderately from 20% to 25% between 1972 to 1992 and
then
rocketed substantially to 45% from 1992 to 2012.
Besides
,
Children
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fictions
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fiction
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climbed by 5% slightly between 1972 to 2012.
however
, Biography experienced
minimal
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decrease from 20% to 15%.
In addition
,it followed
this
way and fell to 8% in 2012. As can be seen,
popularity
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the popularity
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of Travel books grew slowly by 3% between 1972 and 1992
while
, since
then
dropped by 10% noticeably. From 1972 to 1992 the Other sector declined marginally by 5% and from 1992 onward,dipped markedly by 8%.
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