The table and chart below give information on police budget

The table and chart below give information on police budget
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The provided pie and table charts illustrate the data on the changes to law enforcement’s budget
Overall
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, the list had a general change in their numbers,
as a result
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, all of the three categories had an increase in the police budget. Meanwhile, the pie diagram had a minor decrease and stable data. If we take a closer look at the list, we can see that funding which was from the National Government rose slightly from 175.5 to 177.8 million pounds in 2018
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, other categories had risen too and the biggest rise was in the Local taxes which upsurged to 102.3 from a much lesser 91.2 million pounds in 2017.
However
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, the third and the
last
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category had the least meaningful increase in its numbers, the rest of
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barely had an upward trend from 38 pounds to 38.5m in 2018. Turning to the pie chart details about the way money was divided, employers’ wages had the biggest part 75% of all expenses, but, it went down to 69% in 2018, meanwhile, high tech experienced a double improvement from 8% to 14%. Only transportation and rent fees remained at the same level at 14%.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • allocation
  • budgetary constraints
  • community policing
  • economic conditions
  • expenditures
  • funding allocation
  • governmental policies
  • operational efficiency
  • personnel costs
  • public safety
  • resource allocation
  • revenue sources
  • surveillance technology
  • trend analysis
  • fiscal responsibility
  • capital investments
  • public sector spending
  • crime rate
  • policy reform
  • infrastructure upgrades
  • staff training
  • emergency response capabilities
  • fiscal year
  • financial oversight
  • budget cuts
  • incremental increase
  • law enforcement agencies
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