Your neighbor has recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house. Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter: - Explain the reasons for the noise, - Apologise - Describe what action you will take.

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Dear Mrs. Smith, I am writing to apologise for the noise we have made recently. Our family has had some construction work in the

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two weeks. We have built two extra rooms for our sons as they are growing up to have their own spaces. I noticed that the noise

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from the automatic sawing machine and the dialogues from the workers. I feel so sorry that

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noise has given your family a lot of conveniences. I really do not know that Mr Smith

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sleep disorders so he need rest during the day, but he could not because of those sounds. On a positive note, the sawing works will be finished today and all the jobs will be completed in two weeks,

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I have asked the workers not to talk or laugh out loud any longer. If you still hear that, please let me know. Once again, please accept my apology and thank you for your patience. Yours sincerely, Maria Do

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task achievement

Try to ensure that the tone remains consistently formal throughout, especially in the apology section.

coherence cohesion

Consider rephrasing "given your family a lot of conveniences" to something clearer, such as "caused your family discomfort".

coherence cohesion

Make sure to clarify how the actions you plan to take will help alleviate the noise issue more effectively.

coherence cohesion

The letter has a clear structure with an introduction, body, and conclusion.

task achievement

The apology is sincere and conveys an understanding of the impact of the noise.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

167 words

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