The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminum cans. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram highlights the process by which
aluminum
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aluminium
cans
are recycled. Overall
, there are seven stages in the process, beginning with the special collection of Add an article
the can
a can
can
and finishing with the sales of Fix the agreement mistake
cans
aluminum
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aluminium
cans
to public
.
First of all, used Correct article usage
the public
cans
need to be thrown in special bins and taken to collection centers
. Change the spelling
centres
Then
they are collected and transported to a factory where cans
are first sorted and then
cleaned. In the subsequent stage, the cans
are shredded and crushed in a special machine.
The metal is then
heated to a high temperature to allow the aluminum
to melt. Change the spelling
aluminium
Following
this
, it is rolled out flat to a thickness of between 2.5mm and 6 mm, (depending on what it is going to be used for). The aluminum
is now ready to be recycled into new Change the spelling
aluminium
packaging
, Change the noun form
packagings
such
as drink containers. Finally
, the new cans
are delivered to soft
drink factory where they are filled. The Correct article usage
the soft
cans
can now be sold to the public and reused. In the UK, 74 per cent of all aluminum
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aluminium
cans
that are sold are recycled.
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