The diagram below shows the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2004.

The diagram below shows the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2004.
The map illustrates the modification that has taken place in the site of the school between the year 2004 and the projection of 2024.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the number of students will increase in the next 20 years and both old buildings remain the same.
However
, new facilities will be set up
while
a sports field is relocated.
Firstly
, school building number three will be constructed on the old sports field with a new parking lot on the right-hand side. The play area will be resized and moved to the south of the new parking.
In addition
, trees will be planted in the east along two new facilities. Both old schools will be redesigned and connected to each other. The old path will only tether the new academy and the new connection, the other part will be removed.
Additionally
, the new connection route between the entrance and car park 2 will spring up and it will pass both school 2 and the new sports area.
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