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The line graph shows the persantage of four different types of feul in use between thw years 1800 and 2000

The line graph shows the persantage of four different types of feul in use between thw years 1800 and 2000
#line #persantage #four #feul #thw #years
The line graph gives information about how much fuel ,namely wood ,coal , oil,
gas
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and gas
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were
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was
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 used .
Overe
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Over
three
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three-year
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year
 period between 1800 and 2000
Overall
 , the four fuels used
differnd
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different
differed
 trends in the time period.
While
 the
utilise
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utilised
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 oil, coal,
gas
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and gas
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 rose with some fluctuations , the
spend
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spent
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 wood sharply
fall
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fell
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. But
three
line
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lines
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 only
increse
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increase
 during the
three
year
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years
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. As the graph shows , wood was
spend
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spent
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 started at 100
persentage
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percentage
 in 1800 followed by a big decline
just
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of just
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 over 0
persentage
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percentage
et
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at
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 the end of
year
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the year
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 in
2000
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the 2000
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year
 . Regarding coal
use
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use,
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 0
stronges
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strongest
matchest
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matches
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 in 1800.
Then
 , it
increase
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increased
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 25% in 1850. But
also
 grow about 50 years .
Moreover
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Moreover,
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 in
1900
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1900,
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 it was
slightly
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slight
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drop
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dropped
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, in 200
year
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years
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it was
usage
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used
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 33. As for oil started at 0 in
1900
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the 1900
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year
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years
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, but that figure only
increase
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increased
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 and again
at the end
 of
year
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the year
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 was rose 30% in
2000
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the 2000
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year
 . Turning to gas it began
also
0
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at 0
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%
however
 it was rapidly jump from 0% to 30%
at the end
 of
year
By contrast
 ,
three
 types of fuel
rosed
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rose
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 from 1800 to 2000
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, at the end".
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words three, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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