The graph below shows the global demand for different textile fibres between 1980 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the global demand for different textile fibres between 1980 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph compares global demand different textile reporting the main features between 1980 and 2005
Overall
, three fibres experienced different trends in the time period.
While
the cotton and polyester fibres rose with some fluctuations, the cellulosic and wool fell over time As the graph shows, cotton fibre figure started at 15
million
tonnes
in 1980 and it slowly grew to 20
million
tonnes
in 2000, afterwards in 2005 it steadily increased to 30
million
tonnes
and decreased back to 20
million
tonnes
in 2010 and with a small change to 25
million
tonnes
in 2015. Regarding polyester trend it started at only 5
million
tonnes
in 1980.
Then
tiny growth to 10
million
tonnes
in 1990 and it grew until it reaches 50
million
tonnes
in 2015.
By contrast
, cellulosic fibre experienced really tiny growth it started at only 5
million
tonnes
and it did not change till 2000,
then
it changed to around 10
million
tonnes
in 2015
finally
, the
last
one is wool fibre experienced really small decrease started at 3
million
tonnes
in 1980 and it decreased to 2
million
tonnes
in 2015.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • demand
  • fluctuation
  • trend
  • synthetic fibres
  • natural fibres
  • technological advancements
  • consumer preference
  • economic factors
  • environmental concerns
  • milestone
  • significant increase/decrease
  • comparative analysis
  • highlight
  • period
  • data illustrates
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