The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012

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The provided charts compare how many books are sold by a bookseller over a 40-year period.

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, what stands out from the charts is that in 1972 the figures for

Adult

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fiction

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, Children’s

fiction

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, and

Biography

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had a similar percentage, with that for

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fiction

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seeing the largest increase. Looking at the data for 1972, the proportions of

adult

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fiction

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, children's

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, and

biography

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sales

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were equal to one-fifth, with each of them being half of the other book

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. In 1992, there was a gradual rise to 25% and 22% in

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adult

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fiction

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and children’s

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respectively.

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, the indicator of

biography

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sales

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decreased to 15%. The shares of travel book

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went up steadily to 18%, being smaller than those of other books by a margin of 2%. Regarding rates in 2012, there was a considerable increase of 20% in the percentage of

adult

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fiction

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, accounting for 45% of the total and making

sales

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with the highest proportion. Turning to the share of children’s

fiction

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, it saw a small growth to 25%, representing the second-highest indicator. With regard to Travel and

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sales

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, the former and the latter made up 10% and 8% of the total respectively compared with the percentage of others,

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indicated 12%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words adult, fiction, biography, sales with synonyms.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

211 words

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The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012

It is arguable that some proponents believe that domestic waste is not recycled properly and they want the government to take actions in order to encourage people to recycle more.

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it is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (dinosaur,dodo), there is no reason why people should try to prevent thid form happening.

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An overseas friend wants to visit your country on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter •Recommend the best time of year to visit and why •Describe the types of accommodation your friend could choose – •Say what you would like to show your friend in your country