The table shows the export values of various products in 2009 and 2010
The provided table illustrates the data of export values of different items during the
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of 2009 and 2010. Correct your spelling
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item on the list suggests, the whole table had a growth of 20% and improved from export profits of 32 to 38.4 in 2010.
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, not all of the products went up in their overseas sales, Clothing and Manufacturing were the only ones to go down from their positions of 6 and 5.5 to 5 and 4 in 2010, a slight dip for Clothing and a sharp drop to
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