The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
The charts illustrate how much a UK school spent on different running costs over a 20-year period.
Overall
, teachers’ salaries
constituted the largest cost
to the school, and while
spending increased dramatically for equipment and insurance, there were corresponding drops in expenditure
on things such
as books and on other workers’ salaries
.
In all three years, the greatest expenditure
was on staff salaries
. But while
other workers’ salaries
saw a fall from 28% in 1981 to only 15% of spending in 2001, teachers’ pay remained the biggest cost
, reaching 50% of total spending in 1991 and ending at 45% in 2001.
Expenditure
on resources such
as books had increased to 20% by 1991 before decreasing to only 9% by the end of the period. In contrast
, the cost
of furniture and equipment saw an opposite trend. This
cost
decreased to only 5% of total expenditure
in 1991 but rose dramatically in 2001 when it represented 23% of the school budget. Similarly
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Similarly,
cost
of insurance experienced a rising trend, growing from only 2% to 8% by 2001 (or: there was a rise in the cost
of insurance).Submitted by writingbhos on
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