The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
The charts illustrate how much a UK school spent on different running costs over a 20-year period.
Overall
, teachers’ Linking Words
salaries
constituted the largest Use synonyms
cost
to the school, and Use synonyms
while
spending increased dramatically for equipment and insurance, there were corresponding drops in Linking Words
expenditure
on things Use synonyms
such
as books and on other workers’ Linking Words
salaries
.
In all three years, the greatest Use synonyms
expenditure
was on staff Use synonyms
salaries
. But Use synonyms
while
other workers’ Linking Words
salaries
saw a fall from 28% in 1981 to only 15% of spending in 2001, teachers’ pay remained the biggest Use synonyms
cost
, reaching 50% of total spending in 1991 and ending at 45% in 2001.
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Expenditure
on resources Use synonyms
such
as books had increased to 20% by 1991 before decreasing to only 9% by the end of the period. Linking Words
In contrast
, the Linking Words
cost
of furniture and equipment saw an opposite trend. Use synonyms
This
Linking Words
cost
decreased to only 5% of total Use synonyms
expenditure
in 1991 but rose dramatically in 2001 when it represented 23% of the school budget. Use synonyms
Linking Words
Similarly
the Add a comma
Similarly,
cost
of insurance experienced a rising trend, growing from only 2% to 8% by 2001 (or: there was a rise in the Use synonyms
cost
of insurance).Use synonyms
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