THE CHART BELOW SHOWS THE CHANGES THAT TOOK PLACE IN THREE DIFFERENT AREAS OF CRIME IN NEWPORT CITY CENTER FROM 2003 – 2012
The graph illustrates the
crime
rate changes that occurred in Newport city reported from 2003-2012 in three types of crimes.
It is immediately noticeable that the burglary rates had significantly dropped over time Use synonyms
in contrast
to the car being stolen, Linking Words
while
robbery rates remained stable throughout the period.
Burglary was the most common theft found in Newport with almost 3500 Linking Words
cases
reported in 2003, it continued to escalate and hit its peak in 2004 with nearly 4000 reports. Since Use synonyms
then
, the Linking Words
crime
Use synonyms
had
decreased gradually and hit its rock bottom in 2008 with about 1000 thefts.
Wrong verb form
has
While
the first type of Linking Words
crime
had diminished, carjacking in 2008 with over 2000 thefts Use synonyms
which
became the most recurrent Correct pronoun usage
apply
crime
. It started at 3000 Use synonyms
cases
; Use synonyms
then
, moderately increased over the period, Linking Words
eventually
ended the 2012 reports with just over 2500 Correct word choice
and eventually
cases
.
Robbery, Use synonyms
however
, had the least Linking Words
cases
in Use synonyms
this
city with just over 500 Linking Words
cases
since 2003 which is the comparable amount in 2012.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words crime, cases with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
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