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the table show the average length of video advertisements on the internet and average length of time viewers spend watching them summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mian features, and make comparisions where revelant.

the table show the average length of video advertisements on the internet and average length of time viewers spend watching them summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mian features, and make comparisions where revelant.
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The given table illustrates the average length of video advertisements on the Internet and how many
seconds
 of these full
adverts
people
 watch.
Overall
,
adverts
 for public
service
 show the highest length, and the least is clothing.
People
more
Correct quantifier usage
apply
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prefer to watch the advertisement for public
service
, and the least preferable is other retail. In general, among all kinds of advertisements and their length
people
 watch only half of
it
Correct pronoun usage
them
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.
According to
 the table,
adverts
 for public
service
 have the highest time accounting for 45.8
seconds
, followed by automotive and entertainment with 27.2 and 27.8, respectively. Financial
service
 and other retail show the figures around 20
seconds
. There are only five types that show
adverts
less
Change preposition
in less
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 than 20
seconds
, where clothing is the least with 14.6
seconds
. The highest attention of
people
 on public
service
adverts
 with 18.5
seconds
, followed by automotive and financial services with 14.7 and 16.3
seconds
, respectively. In the middle of the interest of
people
Add a comma
people,
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 there are
adverts
 for travel, entertainment and home furnishings with approximately 13 to 10
seconds
 of watching time. There are four types of
adverts
 that viewers don't look too long which are consumer electronics with 7.1, pharmaceuticals with 6.3, clothing with 6.0 and other retail with only 4.5
seconds
.
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