The graph below shows the changes in production (millions)of three products in a garment factory from 1990 to 2010.

The graph below shows the changes in production (millions)of three products in a garment factory from 1990 to 2010.
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The line graph gives information about the converts in manufacturing volume (millions) of suits, dresses, and coats in cloth manufacturing between 1990 and 2010.
Overall
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over the two decades, the
suit
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changed
production
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trend twice, and the
dress
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slightly grew during the same period.
In addition
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, the
coat
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showed a significant increase in
production
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than other clothes at the same periods. Tuning to the data, in 1990, the
suit
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was produced at 15 million and the
dress
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and the
coat
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was made at 10 and 7 respectively. Notably, in 1995, after a rapid increase, the
suit
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production
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reached a peak of approximately 23.
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, the
coat
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exceeded the
dress
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in 1995 and the
suit
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in 2005 respectively.
In contrast
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, the
coat
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showed stead
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growths, throughout the period shown in the chart. the
coat
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manufacturing volume started at around 7 in 1990 and ended at 25 in 2010.
On the other hand
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, the amount of
production
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of
dress
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remained between 10 to 15 over two decades.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words suit, production, dress, coat with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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