The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature,and make comparisions where relevent.
The flow chart illustrates how
plastic
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bottles
are recycled.
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Overall
, there are nine steps, beginning with putting trash into the container to producing several products from the recycled material.
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To begin
, any type of garbage is thrown away by people in a communal bin. Linking Words
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mixed garbage is Linking Words
then
picked up by a large truck to the recycling centre. In the recycling centre, it is sorted by the staff which separates the Linking Words
plastic
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bottles
from other types of waste. Use synonyms
Next,
the waste containing pure Linking Words
plastic
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bottles
will be compressed into a block before it is crushed. During the crushing process, the huge block is broken down into small pieces and washed with clean water to remove any remained dirt.
In the subsequent stage, cleaned pieces of Use synonyms
plastic
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bottles
are manufactured into Use synonyms
plastic
pellets with a specific machine. Use synonyms
Following
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, the pellets are heated at a specific temperature to form some raw materials. Raw materials are Linking Words
then
packed in different boxes. Linking Words
Finally
, the raw materials will be reproduced to create various types of end products.Linking Words
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