Nowadays, instead of locally sourced produce, many supermarkets sell a variety of foods imported from countries all across the world. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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comtempory

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contemporary

societies, there has been an uprising trend of selling imported

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rather than local

porducts

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products

in many supermarkets worth considering.

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writer strongly assumes that the drawbacks of the increase in the

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of living and the growth of

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outweigh

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the benefit of the quality of

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. It's important to acknowledge that the availability of

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from external nations has an adverse impact on the individual financial burden

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the rise in the

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of living.

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is because the import taxation in many communities is extremely high for the reason of protection of their domestic markets.

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, the majority of young people are curious and ambitious to purchase trendy and unique items, leading to

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globalization.

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, the

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of urban life rises dramatically, followed by the tendency of citizens’ demands and requirements, contributing to various social problems.

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disadvantageous factor of importing

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instead

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of local sources is that

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would cause the loss of occupations for many people.

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, the more

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is imported to sell in those countries, the fewer jobs are to do on account of a decrease in demand for locally produced

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. Unless

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great number of their products are bought in the national market like in the past, the amount of work for localists will

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and they will be redundant and fired

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they cannot find any other

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careers

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do.

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reason, the rate of

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worldwide has increased, which the governments have to take action to address.

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, making

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of

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worse and worse during the integration of foreign

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. Some critics,

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, believe that imported

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being high-quality is the most crucial essence compared to other factors. There's no doubt that health is a major concern for many people today, leading to a preference for imported

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, which is often perceived as being of higher quality.

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may be true, but

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adaptation would destroy the national cuisine and traditional

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making it the best to control

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economy by producing and transporting external products. As a repercussion, it must be noticed that the biodiversity of culture will turn into other traditions on the grounds of the disappearance of local

food

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as well as

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the extinction of traditional

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producers. To recapitulate, the potential impacts on good

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quality

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the negative downsides of the increasing metropolitan living

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and the acute situation of

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.

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, it should have been demonstrated that authorities globally take

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in prioritizing promoting locally sourced

food

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over the continued import of foreign products.