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IELTS Regional household recycling rates

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The
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 graph shows 200 the percentage of levels of regional household recycling in three countries, namely (France,
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 and the
UK
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) between 2005 and 2015.
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It is clear that
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 the number of
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 and
Germany
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 were at the top of the percentage, but France declined slightly than the
UK
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 and
Germany
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 levels.
According to
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 the graph. The percentage of recycling in the
UK
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 increased significantly to 40% from 2005 to 2008. The
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 of the
UK
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 met the level of France which from 2005 to 2007 fell down to 40%. Next to the
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 the
UK
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 went up by 50% between 2008 and 2009 the never of the falls
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 top 2009 reached 60% from 2013 period.
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, the
UK
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 rose minimally at 61% from 2013 to 2015. The second
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 of the graph is
Germany
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. The
Germany
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 it started
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 30% was went up between 2005 and 2007. Soon by soon, the
Germany
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 was increased significantly at 40% from 2007 to 2009 period.

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Structural
Ensure a clear introduction, overview, and conclusion in your essay to guide the reader through your analysis.
Organization
Use paragraphs to separate different sections or points in your essay, enhancing readability and organization.
Language
Incorporate varied and precise vocabulary to describe trends, changes, and comparisons more effectively.
Grammar
Check your essay for grammatical errors and aim to correct them for a smoother reading experience.
Analysis
Provide a more detailed analysis by comparing the countries more comprehensively and by discussing reasons or implications if possible.
Content
You successfully identified the key trends in the data for each country.
Overview
You have attempted to provide an overview of the graph's information.

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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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