One of your colleagues is leaving for a new job, and your manager has asked you to arrange a farewell party for him/her. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, suggest a suitable date and time for the party recommend a place discuss the food and entertainment options that should be available You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Mr/Mrs ..................,

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Dear Mr.John I hope

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message finds you well.I am writing

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letter regards the arrangement of a farewell party for Mr. Jone.

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, the party will be on Friday evening 29th February at 6pm as

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date is arranged for the convenience of all employees because they do not have to leave the job and not to spoil their weekend as well.

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, we all planned to have a party in our nearby hotel 'The Taj Hotel' which is just

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2km from our office, plus there are very incredible vegetarian and non-vegetarian options for food available for our employees. At the very least, 'The Taj Hotel' provide not only food but a plethora of free entertainment sources

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as pop music, an art and sculpture gallery and a fine club.

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can share with you now. I will be pleased to supply any

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information you require. Your's sincerely, Jyoti

PriyankaFri Feb 21 2025

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The letter addresses all required points, including the date, location, and entertainment options.

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The tone is friendly and appropriate for a farewell context, which is very positive.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

157 words

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