The table shows average calorie intake in the United States over a period of time.

The table shows average calorie intake in the United States over a period of time.
The graph illustrates the
calorie
intake
in the United States in 1970, 1990 and 2010.
Overall
,
it is clear that
added sugar , added fat and grains took an upward trend in
calories
since 1970,
while
meat, dairy and vegetables had a downward tendency.
However
, fruit and vegetables had the lower
calorie
intake
during the whole period given. In 1970, the average
calorie
intake
for added sugar represented 400
calories
,
then
445 in 1990 and 460 in 2010.
In addition
, meat, eggs and nuts
calorie
intake
was
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465
calories
in 1970, 455
calories
in 1990 to 480
calories
in 2010.
Moreover
, grain
calorie
intake
was at 430 in 1970, 575
calories
in 1990 and 20 years later, peaked at 625
calories
. In comparison, fruit average
calorie
intake
remained stable at 85
calories
in both years of 1990 and 2010. It is
also
the lowest
calorie
intake
compared to all the other foods.
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