The map below show the village of Stockefort in 1930 and in 2010
The given maps illustrate the development that takes place in the village of Stockefort in the years 1930 and 2010.
Overall
, it can be seen that farmland is wiped out and replaced by many accommodations for residences. Furthermore
, there is the extension of a primary school to the east as well as
a large house turn
into a retirement home.
Wrong verb form
turned
To begin
with, a domestic area which is located on both sides of the route in the village was obliterated. On the left side of the main road, a post office was the only facility that remained in the same location and the buildings were built alongside the road. Moreover
, there were two new extended roads, the first one was square-shaped with the houses on one side and the other one was the aisle with a dead end with houses on both sides.
On the right side of the main road, there was another aisle same as on the left. The primary school had two more buildings attached to the east, besides
, the garden was shrunk from the past and two more new buildings were constructed. Additionally
, the proposal of a large house changed into retirement for elderly people and an entranceway to the house,four
houses sprung up.Correct word choice
and four
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