ou have seen an advertisement from a couple who live in an Australia. For someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter the couple, in your letter: explain why you think you would be suitable the job say what else you could do for the family give your reasons for wanting the job
Dear Sir /Madam,
My name is Keyhan and I am writing to you regarding your advertisement that was published in the local newspaper on the 27th of April.
As you need a person to teach Persian to your children and it is my native language and right now I am training a lot of students in the J&A school, so I think I will be able to help you in
this
regard based on my background and 15 years of experience in this
field of education.
additionally
, I can design games for them to stimulate their creativity for better performance in the future which is somehow necessary these days.
I live nearby so I can walk only 10 minutes to your home whenever you want and our schedules can be flexible as I am free all the afternoons.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely,
Ebrahimi KeyhanSubmitted by keyhan454 on
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To enhance the letter, consider providing more detailed examples of your teaching methods or how your experience has specifically prepared you for teaching their children.
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It may be beneficial to structure the letter with a more explicit outline of what the job encompasses and how your skills directly align with those needs, thus providing a stronger argument for your suitability.
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Your letter effectively introduces your experience and expresses your enthusiasm for the job, which is crucial in making a strong case for your candidature.
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The use of a clear greeting and closing adds a professional touch, which is commendable.