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The graph below shows hom many people played four types of sports

The graph below shows hom many people played four types of sports
The line graph provides data about the
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 sports in
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Australia between 1095 and 2005. It is clear from the chart the most dramatic changes can be seen
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of
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 sports in Rugby
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teenager
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,
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Tennis minimally
rised
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raised
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 period.But Badminton and Basketball almost remain stable between 50 and 100 %. In 2005 half of all Australian people
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 the Rugby.

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