The map below show the village of Stockefort in 1930 and in 2010
The maps illustrate how Stokerford developed over two periods (1930 and 2010).
Overall
, Stokeford Village
transformed from farmland to housing. Furthermore
, there have been significant changes in layout and facilities over the period given.
In 1930, the number of farmlands sited in two areas, which were in the east and south of Stokeford. Moreover
, two shops and the post office were located to the west of the village
. This
village
had a bridge connecting the river stroke, lining from north to south on the upper side.
In 2010, there was considerable growth in residences, and the farmlands were removed from this
village
. The garden on the east side had been converted into a retirement home. Furthermore
, primary schools also
increased in size. The shops on the west side disappeared and were replaced by houses. Meanwhile, the bridge still remains.
In conclusion, Stokerford has developed from a natural village
into a modern suburb. This
means the area has less green space for people living there.Submitted by aquariusgirl17 on
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