1.It has been suggested that cars and public transport should be banned from city centres and only bicycles be allowed instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that

bicycles

should be the only

transportation

method

that is

allowed in big cities replacing cars and public transport. I completely disagree with the idea because other methods of

transportation

other than

bicycles

are more convenient and certain

group

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of the

populations

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population

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are not able to ride

bicycles

. Banning motor

vehicles

and public

transportation

from major cities is not a good idea because undoubtedly, cars, buses and

subway

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subways

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are more convenient as methods of

transportation

as compared to

bicycles

. These

vehicles

allow people to get to

the

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desired destinations faster for longer

distance

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distances

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, which is crucial for

working

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the working

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community in the

city

centre, and can fit

larger

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crowd at one time as opposed to riding a

bike

. Riding a car is more suitable in specific circumstances,

such

as travelling with family members, especially if involving

elderly

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the elderly

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and small children.

Furthermore

, not everyone is physically fit to ride a bicycle and it is not ideal for disabled people, the elderly and children. If the law prohibits

use

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of motor

vehicles

and public transport in the busy area,

this

limits the accessibility of the special population from going to the

city

.

Instead

of relying only on

bicycles

, riding a

bike

should be encouraged alongside other

vehicles

by improving cycling infrastructure,

for example

, in Copenhagen, the

city

provides separate

bike

paths,

from

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both

vehicles

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traffic and

pedestrian

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pedestrians

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, and ongoing planning and commitment to create new

bike

path to become the top place in bicycle-friendly

city

in the world. In conclusion, I believe that we should not exclusively

relying

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on

bicycles

and ban cars and public transport

,

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because the latter are more practical for large

group

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of people and more friendly to the community that are not physically fit to ride

bicycles

.