The graph below shows information about the use of public transport in one country by age and location of residence in 2016.

The graph below shows information about the use of public transport in one country by age and location of residence in 2016.
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The line chart compares the proportions of
people
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using public
transport
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categorized into six
age
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groups between the large cities and other regions in 2016. Generally speaking, the demand for using public
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of
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in two kinds of places was different, and the total number of dwellers travelling by transit system was higher than those living in the suburbs. What stands out is that the gap between
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with public
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usage at the
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of 31 to 45 was the largest. It was uncommon for young children under 15 to use
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means of
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with a rate of 40% and 15% in large cities and suburban regions respectively. Both kinds of places saw a significant increase in the
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from 16 to 30. The figure for city residents continued to rise considerably and reached a peak of around 68%,
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there was a sharp decrease in the rate for other dwellers at the next 15-year
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, with a gap of approximately 50%.
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, the public
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demand changed when
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got older. From 61 to 75 years old, a lower number of citizens commuted by public
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, in comparison with other inhabitants. Each figure accounted for under 20% from the
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of 61, making the gap narrower.
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