The diagram illustrates how steel rods are manufactured in the furniture industry. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates how steel rods are manufactured in the furniture industry. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented flowchart depicts the systematic process of producing steel rods in the furniture industry. In essence, the production journey starts with the acquisition of raw
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and ends with inspecting the steel rods. Commencing with acquiring iron ore, yellow ore and carbon and transferring it to the melting slit which has a temperature of 1300-1500 degrees Celsius. The melted mixture
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goes to the smelting cabin for refinement followed by the ingot pour where condescent metal is poured into ingots and these ingots get connected to a cooling reservoir that has a temperature range from 60-100 degrees Celsius. The metal advances through the nozzles to the strand casting, rolling using the rollers, heat treatment is given using the heating machine, a surface check is done by measuring automation and a cutter is used during the sizing step. The ID stamping and inspection are the culminating steps of
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production process of steel rods which are ready to be used by the furniture industry.
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  • diagram
  • manufacturing
  • steel rods
  • furniture industry
  • steel billets
  • furnace
  • rollers
  • diameter
  • coiled
  • wire reels
  • cooling process
  • sprayed
  • temperature
  • harden
  • cut
  • bundled
  • distribution
  • furniture manufacturers
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