The graph belowe shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007
The line chart illustrates
median
carbon dioxide (CO2) outflows per individual in the four Europe countries Correct article usage
the median
among
1967 and 2007.
The data declared that Change preposition
between
United
Kingdom Correct article usage
the United
was
the highest rate of emissions, Verb problem
had
in
the other hand, Portugal Change preposition
on
was
the lowest one. The graph fluctuated from 1967 to 2007 for each Verb problem
had
states
.
Change to a singular noun
state
Although
United
Kingdom had the Correct article usage
the United
upper
Correct word choice
highest
percentages
of 11 % in 1967, Fix the agreement mistake
percentage
but
the trend decreased each year until touched 9 % in 2007. Remove the conjunction
apply
Converesly
, Portugal had the lowest level of 1 % in 1967, but it Correct your spelling
Conversely
rised
time by time until reached 5 % in 2007. Correct your spelling
rose
This
phenomenon followed
by Italy Add a missing verb
was followed
which
the ratio of emissions Correct word choice
where
shown
Wrong verb form
showed
increasing
number from 5 % in 1967 Correct article usage
an increasing
then
peaked at 7 % in 2007.
The most successful story came from Sweden, the country had the ability to declined
its CO2 discharges from 9 % in 1967, Change the form of the verb
decline
then
dropped at
5 % in 2007.Change preposition
to
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