The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane

A glance at the diagram provides the process of making

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.

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, there 7 steps in the process which commences with the growth of

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canes and ends with drying and cooling before becoming

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.

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the information shown in the diagram, the growing period of

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canes

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is 12 to 18 months.

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, there are two harvesting ways

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one is by

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and the other is by machines.After harvesting,

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canes

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will be crushed by equipment and

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into juice.Afterwards, the juice will be purified by a limestone filter.

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, the purified juice will be heated by an evaporator to become syrup.After heating, the following

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is separating

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crystars

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crystals

from syrup via a centrifuge.

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,

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crystats

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crystals

turn into

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after drying and cooling.

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, it can be apparently seen that it takes more than a year to wait for the harvest of

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cans which is the longest part

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the

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sugar

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production.