Some peope say in order to prevent illness and disease, governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you argree or disagree?

Many people hold the view that so as to prevent disease and illness, authorities should take the task of reducing environmental pollution and housing

wastes

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more seriously.

This

writer contends that alleviating pollutants and combining them with broader factors

such

as social isolation will enhance the air quality for citizens and

also

prevent disease and illness. It must be recognized that

due to

the

supporting

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of robots and AI technology

that

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human's

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human

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life

condition

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conditions

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become more and more comfortable than before. Because of the development and improvement in breakthroughs with inventions,

its

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caused many

problems

to our nature and our activities are the reason for pollution

as well as

disease.

Besides

, humans directly releasing contaminants into the ocean will

also

cause a lot of repercussions to themselves.

Therefore

, governments should not turn a blind eye to these

problems

and point out some temporary and long-term methods.

For instance

, they can organise a campaign or crusade to advocate for citizens in order to protect their life

environment

by planting more trees, collecting floating garbage tackling housing

problems

such

as hygiene in each household and helping each other to protect the natural

environment

.

On the other hand

,

goverments

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governments

government

should take

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measure

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measures

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of

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for

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machines, tools and

equipments

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equipment

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into protecting

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to protect

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environment

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the environment

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as well as

working

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out some backlog

problems

.

Moreover

, higher priorities should attract citizens' lives, as it could be one of the reasons for making the

environment

worse. Nowadays, people are littering and factories are releasing more contaminated fumes into the atmosphere, which harms the

environment

and people living around there,

therefore

the government should fine them to prevent those phenomena and protect the

environment

. In conclusion, enough awareness in defending environmental and housing issues

are

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neccessary

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necessary

because

this

will lead to a new future life of all

human

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globally.