The pie charts below show the percentage of five types of food sold by a supermarket in 2003 and 2013.
The round charts
gives
information about the proportion of five different Change the verb form
give
food
sold by a supermarket in 2003 and 2013.
Fix the agreement mistake
foods
Overall
, in 2003, Vegetable was the highest seller among the five foods, and Meat
and Seafood followed second and third sellers in retails
. Correct subject-verb agreement
retail
On the other hand
, after one decade, Meat
became the highest seller surpassed by Vegetables. In addition
, Fruits and Eggs
increased the same percentage of selling amount after 10 years.
Turning to the data in more detail, in 2003, Vegetables and Meat
sold almost 45% of all foods proportion, and the figures at 25% and 21% respectively. Moreover
, Eggs
selling amount was at 20% and Seafood sold just 1% under compared to Eggs
at
the same year.
Looking Change preposition
in
about
more details, in 2013, Change preposition
into
Meat
and Vegetables reversed their orders. In addition
, Fruits
and Seafood of percentages risen each 2%. Correct article usage
the Fruits
However
, the proportion of Eggs
notably decline
Wrong verb form
declined
under
6%, so Change preposition
to under
Eggs
became the lowest seller in the same year.Submitted by subin12260 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words meat, eggs with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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