You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter: •give details of your visit to the restaurant •explain the reason for the celebration •say what was good about the food and the service
#friends #restaurant #occasion #food #service #manager #•give #visit #•explain #reason #celebration #•say
Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing
this
letter to express my feelings about your restaurant
I went there on Saturday night with my classmates.It was the most beautiful and comfortable restaurant I have ever seen. There were three floors and comfortable chairs.We really liked its dishes and cups.I want to go there again sometime in the future.
We went there on Saturday night because we all were free and it was anniversary
Correct article usage
the anniversary
that
we finished school ten years ago so all Correct word choice
when
of
thirty of my classmates were there so l never forget that day.
Change preposition
apply
Moreover
,we liked your food and service.We ordered two kilogram
palov and three portion kebabs.We ate them with appetite and l liked your service especially.All of your waiters were conscientious and Add a hyphen
two-kilogram
kindly
.They tried to be liked by customers Change the word
kind
as
they can so they talked kindly Correct word choice
apply
with
customers and acted fast.
I hope l will go there again in the future.
Yours sincerely
LazizChange preposition
to
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Coherence & Cohesion
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Coherence & Cohesion
Use more complex sentence structures and ensure that your ideas are logically connected with a variety of linking words. This will improve the flow of your writing.
Task Achievement
Expand on each of the bullet points given in the task with specific details, ensuring that you are responding completely to each aspect of the task. You could elaborate more on the details of the visit, the special occasion and provide specific examples of what was good about the food and service.
Task Achievement
Maintain a consistent and suitable tone throughout the letter. Aim for a more formal tone appropriate for a letter to a restaurant manager, and avoid informal language.