165.Some parents say that children should play individually more than in a group. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this and include your own opinion.

In any

society

, parents try to protect their offspring at any cost.

Thus

, some guardians resist their kids' companionship with others even at play and they prefer to let their

child

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enjoy life alone. Generally,

this

can protect the

child

from bad influences but

at the end

of the day, it leads to

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a kid with a lack of social skills.

Hence

this

writer wholeheartedly believes the above notion is a bad influence on the

child

. First and foremost, people try to keep their

children

away from

society

due to

the belief that bad

friendship

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can harm kids. When a young

one

is with the peer groups, if a badly influenced member is with the group they can motivate the good

one

into the bad easily.

For instance

, drug dealers target most of the time student groups to attract more customers because young minds cannot separate good from bad and they easily do whatever their friends would do.

Hence

, growing up the kids alone would be a better option in

this

contemporary world.

However

,

this

leads to the development of a

child

with a lack of social skills who cannot strive in

society

. when little

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play on their own they will not learn to share ,and not develop skills like communication, leadership and empathy

whereas

ones who are more social, would develop

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involuntarily

.

For example

,

due to

too much parental involvement in present university students, there are a lot of suicidal

attemps

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attempts

attempt

were recorded among them ,as it is the first time they open up to

society

,and they do not know how to live with peers , stress leads them to think on ending their life.

Thus

, these dramatic social issues cannot cornered easily. Owing to all these facts I believe parents should allow their

children

to be with others because

then

they can learn important life lessons and they can strive in

society

, and mother and father cannot be always behind their

child

and they should stand their feet

one

day. If parents do not allow it, they will get lost in

one

day. In conclusion, guardians try to protect their

children

by keeping them away from

society

and in a way it will prevent bad influences ,but unfortunately, it creates a

child

who can not withstand social pressure.

Thus

this

writer believes allowing the

children

to play along is a major drawback.