The continued rise in the world’s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

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that the

world

nowadays has more

population

compared to the

world

a

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decades ago. There were wars and diseases that took lives away. Now that

this

earth has regained people back, does it become a serious incident

instead

?

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discuss

the underlying cause and the opinion

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it is human society’s greatest concern. The

world

before was restricting the

population

to grow.

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,

such

situations are unlikely

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anymore.

Instead

, the proportions are now getting larger

while

the reasons

are

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vary; the strict rules on abortion in some religions,

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financial struggle in accessing or being educated about birth control which are often found in

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developing countries or some

area

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.

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the rest of the

world

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factually facing

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society’ issue, the

population

research in many countries in East Asia, Europe, and Northern America often illustrates the number of people in their 50 and older proportions

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larger than the 50 years old and below,

this

indicates that the younger generation rate of birth

are

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far less than their

parents

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generations. The most recognisable case is what Japan are facing now; the conditions are not supporting their residents to have children at all; over workload,

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cost of living making it difficult to raise kids.

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consequence is considered

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major problem in their country because it might be difficult to propel their country. It might be true that

population

overgrowth is concerning and needs

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careful

inspections

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, yet, not all

part

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the

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world

is

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experiencing the same thing; many countries are

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facing what is the opposite and

also

need to tackle