Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discubss both these views and give your own opinion.

Every year, there are more and more

students

enrolling for

university

. It is

aruged

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argued

that

university

students

should only focus on their major,

while

others believe that

in addition

to their main subjects would be beneficial. In my opinion,

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a student, should be able to balance both. It is undoubtedly true that

students

should give all their attention and efforts dedicated to their

study

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studies

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.

For example

, medical

students

are a specialized

filed

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field

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,

therefore

their length of

study

tend

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to be longer than the other major

students

, which

consisted

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at

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of at

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least 7 years of research and lab

works

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. On top of

that

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that,

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they need to do residency in the hospitals. With all

these

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work and

time

needed, there is far less

time

left for

other submajor

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another submajor study

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study

.

On the other hand

, globalization

have

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provided job diversities,

more

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and more

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and more

companiese

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companies

hiring people with

mutiful

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beautiful

skillsets

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skills

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. To fit

this

change,

for instance

, Information Technology

students

need to learn another language to boost their opportunity to be employed by

global

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company. In my humble thought,

time

management is key for any

university

student. It is

crutial

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crucial

critical

to learn how to manage

time

properly,

for example

, most major

curriculum

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contains

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few lectures

througout

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throughout

the semester,

the

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rest of

free

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time

was

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given to

students

to

self

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self-study

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study

.

Instead

of an interesting hobby, it is easy to allocate

time

to attend a lecture

that is

interesting and valuable. For me,

i

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I

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wanted to be a teacher,

therefore

i

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tried to learn and

obeserved

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observe

observed

different

lecture's

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lecture

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teaching

style

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styles

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which helped me tremendously when

i

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was looking for jobs. Learning how to use

time

efficiently is essential for

University

students

. In conclusion,

University

students

should focus on their major and

qualifcation

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qualification

qualifications

but there is always

time

for improvement

in addition

to their major. To balance

time

is the key quality to learn and practice.