The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019
The line graph illustrates changes in the possession of electrical appliances and time spent doing housework in households in a particular nation between 1920 to 2019.
Overall
, it has an upward trend in ownership of washing machines, Refrigerators and vacuum cleaners. However
, downward
trend towards hours spent on housework per week.
The proportion of washing machines was 40 per Add an article
the downward
a downward
cent
in 1920 grew steadily to 60percent in 1940 and fluctuated between 1960 to 2000 around
70 per Change preposition
to around
cent
, slightly increase
over 72 per Wrong verb form
increasing
cent
in the year 2019.whereas
, refrigerators and vacuum cleaners began at 0 and 30 per cent
in the beginning and grew drastically till 2000 where reaching the highest point in the graph with 100 % and remain the unchanged end of the year 2019.
On the other hand
,hours spent on housework every week for washing clothes , preparing meals and cleaning have declined trend. Individuals spent 50 % in the year 1920 and fell drastically to 20 % in 1960 ,slowly declining till 2019 settling with
above 10 %.Change preposition
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