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Write a letter to a friend to ask him/her to develop a website for your business. In your letter: Give a brief description of the business Mention what you’d like to be there on the website Provide some ideas on the use of images on the website.

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Dear John, Hope you are doing well. How are Emily and Will? I recently opened a grocery store a few months ago that specializes in promoting organic
products
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. I a looking forward to expanding it to reach a wide customer base for the sustainability of my business. The suggestion I received from my other team members is to build a website that clearly illustrates our services. The homepage should have four sections
such
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 as fruits, vegetables, dairy and value-added
products
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.The main emphasis should be given to fruits and vegetables. The background of the website should be green in colour and the text should be white. I expect each page to consist
at
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 least 9 items in a 3 by 3 template. The price should be highlighted in large fonts followed by the weight in small fonts. The images for each item should be clear. Especially the pictures of vegetables and fruits need to be in high contrast. The pictures of dairy
products
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 should clearly state the fat percentage and the country of origin. The value-added
products
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 must appear as their original package. These details are a must and I hope that you will be able to get them ready by the end of
this
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 month. Thank you for your help. Regards, Matthew

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To further improve your letter, consider adding more detail about the specific features or functionalities you envision for your website, such as user interaction elements, social media integration, or any specific technology preferences.
coherence cohesion
Using transitional phrases to connect paragraphs and ideas can enhance the flow and coherence of your letter. Consider incorporating phrases like 'Furthermore,' 'In addition to,' or 'Moving on to' for smoother transitions between sections.
task achievement
Your letter effectively communicates your request to your friend with a clear description of your business and the specific requirements for the website.
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You maintained a friendly and polite tone throughout the letter, which is appropriate for writing to a friend while discussing a professional request.
coherence cohesion
Your letter is well-organized, with each paragraph focusing on a different aspect of the website, which makes it easy to follow and understand.
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