The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. *Fairtrade: a category of products for which farmers from developing countries have been paid an officially agreed fair price.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

*Fairtrade: a category of products for which farmers from developing countries have been paid an officially agreed fair price.
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The tables illustrate the amount of money from Fairtrade sales including labelled coffee and
bananas
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between the
years
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1999 and 2004 in five countries in Europe.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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money from both coffee and
bananas
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after five
years
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is increasing and both products are a primary Fairtrade of the UK and
Switzerland
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.
Firstly
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, In 1999,
Denmark
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earned money from selling labelled coffee higher than other countries in Europe, at 1.8,
while
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Great Britain was about 1.5. Five
years
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later, the UK overcame
Denmark
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and became first
place
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with 20 and
Switzerland
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registered at 6,
whereas
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,
Denmark
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dropped to third
place
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, at 2. Despite other countries, Sweden stayed
last
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in both
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with 0.8 in 1999 and 1 in 2004.
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, income from
Switzerland
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was mostly from
bananas
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, represented 15, and surpassed
Denmark
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, the second
place
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, by 13.
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, in 2004,
Switzerland
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still remained in its position and earned cash from
this
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type of product at 47 which was the highest compared to the others. Followed by the United Kingdom with 5.5 and Belgium with 4; in the meantime,
Denmark
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's earnings from
bananas
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slumped by 1.1 and came in final
place
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.
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