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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The given graph illustrates how many
residents
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 of 5 cities in Australia: Sydney, Melbourne,
Brisbane
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,
Adelaide
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 and Hobart bought
coffee
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 and tea in the
last
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 4 weeks.
Overall
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, it can be observed, that the majority of
people
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 in all cities preferred visiting a cafe to buy
coffee
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 and tea, except
of
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in
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Adelaide
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, where buying
instant
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coffee
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 was more popular.
According to
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 the given data, more than 60% of
people
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 in Melbourne and
in
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apply
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Hobart went to a cafe to buy
coffee
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 and tea. It is almost identical to Sydney. 55% of
people
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 in
Brisbane
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 visited a cafe to buy drinks,
while
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 it was less popular in
Adelaide
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, showing a little less than 50% of
people
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, giving its lead position to buying
instant
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coffee
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. The highest indicator of buying
instant
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coffee
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 is in Hobart - around 55%, which is about the same as in
Brisbane
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. The half of
residents
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 in
Adelaide
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 bought
instant
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coffee
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, which was the most popular there. Buying fresh
coffee
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 in all cities is less widespread than other buying habits, but the highest popularity showed in Sydney, where almost 45% of
residents
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 bought it in the
last
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 4 weeks.
In contrast
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, buying fresh
coffee
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 is the least popular in
Brisbane
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, where the number of
residents
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 was only 35%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words residents, brisbane, adelaide, coffee, people, instant with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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