The table below gives information about the amount of beef exported in five different countries in 2011, 2014 and 2016.

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The table provides data about the quantity of meat which was sold to other five countries

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as Japan, Switzerland, Brazil, Norway and Uruguay in 2012, 2014 and 2016. In 2012, cow's meat which was 224 tonnes transported to Japan ,meanwhile, Norway was 34,

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improved to 81 ,

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had a significant drop, it was 17

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, Latin America and Uruguay demonstrated a good quantity of exports approximately 125,465 and 44,372 loads. In 2014, the country which exported the highest proportion

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tonnes of foodstuff was Brazil, the meantime Latin America received the second place with the number of beef 44372 which later decreased to 42310 rather than the

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2 years, meantime other 3 nations experienced changes in

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exportation.

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, the highest result is shown by Brazil every 2 years.

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, in 2014, when each country had a noticeable fluctuation, Uruguay and Switherland did not, and even in 2016, Switherland diminished too much more.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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The table below gives information about the amount of beef exported in five different countries in 2011, 2014 and 2016.

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