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the graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarize the main features and make comparison where relevant.

the graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarize the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The given line graph delineates the amount of three companies producing
waste
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 throughout 15
years
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 from 2000 to 2015
Overall
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, there had been a downward trend of
waste
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 produced by companies A and
B
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 over the
years
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,
while
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company
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C
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 bucked the trend.
Moreover
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,
company
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 A has been witnessed to be the most
waste
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 produce corporation in 15
years
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 More specifically, in 2000,
Company
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 A ranked first with 12
tonnes
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 of
waste
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 produced, followed by
B
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 and
C
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 with 8 and nearly 5
tonnes
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, respectively. In the next 5
years
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, the amount of
waste
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 released witnessed an increase in companies
B
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 and
C
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 with over 10
tonnes
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 and roughly 6
tonnes
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, respectively. Relating to the remaining period,
company
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 A had planned to reduce
waste
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 by 4
tonnes
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 through the next 10
years
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, allocated with corporation
B
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 decreased by one-third compared with the first year of the survey.
Lastly
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,
Company
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C
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 witnessed an opposite trend by getting to its peak in the
last
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 year with 11
tonnes
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 of
waste
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 produced
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, years, b, company, c, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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