Some people like to try new things.for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with Discuss both these attitudes and your own opinion.
The majority of
people
like to try new things
like visiting new places and trying to eat a variety of foods
. On the other hand
, they love to visit
and usually visit
the place and try day-to-day eating foods
only. In this
essay, I will discuss both views and I give you my opinion.
On the one hand, nowadays many young people
love to travel to new places such
as overseas, museums, and mountains. Firstly
, most people
try to travel to other countries and they explore the countries and where they live, what they eat, and which language they speak. For example
, my elderly brother visited overseas her explored her life
. secondly
, if someone visits to
mountains they can explore Remove the preposition
apply
for
animals, Change preposition
apply
waterfalls
, because, they Correct word choice
and waterfalls
are
love to try Unnecessary verb
apply
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variety
things
exporing
and it can be Verb problem
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life
change.
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a life
On the other hand
, the majority of other people
their everyday lifestyles same because they have financial problems. If they the same new place or they visit
overseas they have to spend a lot of money. If they try to eat new food it is very expensive. For instance
, when someone goes to a pizza hut compared to other foods
pizza is very expensive. Therefore
, they can not try it.
In conclusion, the majority of people
try to visit
a new place and they eat new foods
they can explore the country and their life
. Other people
who have some financial problems and they can not try to
new Change preposition
apply
things
.in my opinion, is visiting new places and trying new things
people's
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that people's
life
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