THE PIE CHART SHOW THE REASONS PEOPLE IN GREAT BRITIAN HAD FOR VISITING ART MUSEUMS IN THE YEARS 1990 and 2000

THE PIE CHART SHOW THE REASONS PEOPLE IN GREAT BRITIAN HAD FOR VISITING ART MUSEUMS IN THE YEARS 1990 and 2000
The pie charts illustrate the proportion of a variety of reasons
of
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people for visiting
art
museums in the UK between 1990 and 2000.
Overall
,
it is clear that
most visitors are keen on learning and gaining knowledge
while
only a few of them visit museums to buy
art
or other ideas. In the first place, 44% of individuals in 1990 went to galleries to study
art
whilst 24% just attended because it was on their schedules. The percentage of reasons for attending a special exhibit and spending their time with their intimates was the same, at 12%. The reason to buy
art
and others occupied 4% and 1% respectively. In the second place, The studying purpose increased by 1% in 2000
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besides
, followed by special exhibit attendees and people who came with their friends and family, were about 18% and 17%. Planning dropped by 15% and became the fourth place.
Moreover
, people who came to buy
art
shot to 5% in 2000 and surpassed other reasons which registered at 3%.
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