The pie charts compare how much the proportions of three fast-food outlets are favoured by teenagers in Vietnam and Indonesia in 2017 with projections for 2027.
The provided pie charts presented the popularity of three fast-food brands among young people in Vietnam and Indonesia during 2017 with 10 years afterwards forecasted figures.
Three stores comprise
McDonald’s
, KFC
and Burger
King.
In Vietnam, the percentage of all companies slightly changed from time to time. McDonald’s
remained the first place followed by Burger
King and KFC
respectively. We can see a downward trend in Burger
King. The percentage decreased from 52.8% to 39%. Meanwhile, McDonald’s
marks significantly rose from 43.1% to 57.4%. KFC
’s figure remained constant.
In Indonesia, KFC
is more popular than Burger
King. McDonald’s
still be the most loved restaurant by kids, however
, its score is expected to decrease to 48.5%. This
is contradicted with KFC
which tends to have better sales among teenagers.
To conclude
, McDonald’s
is the all-time favourite place to go in both regions. While
the other two brands share the remaining market value.Submitted by Punpun on
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