A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: * give contact details for when you are away, * give instructions about how to care for your pet, * describe other household duties you would like your friend to undertake.
Dear Sandy,
I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am writing to give you some information about when I am away on holiday.
Firstly
, the best way to contact me while
I am abroad would be on WhatsApp or if I do not receive your message, please call my mother instead
. Additionally
, you can ring my neighbour, Ms. Cole, if it is urgent.
Regarding what you will have to do for Windy, would be giving her food twice a day as well as
cleaning her litter box. Also
, I would appreciate it if you could play with her and brush her fur in the morning.
Finally
, I would also
like to ask if you could water my plants on the balcony once a day. Another thing would be to take the trash out at least three times throughout the week as I would not like the apartment to be unpleasant for Windy while
I am away.
Thank you so much for all your help. I will certainly bring you a present from my trip in exchange for your hard work.
Best regards,
AmandaSubmitted by amandacflago23 on
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